
Midnight dreams - a short story
Here you get the full story and also the commentary section from me, the author of Midnight dreams.

Skapandet av Midnight dreams
Midnight dreams är en short story som jag skrivit i samband med en kurs i kreativt skrivande på engelska vid Luleå Tekniska Universitet. Detta är ett av mina nyare litterära verk och faktiskt en av få som jag valt att dela med mig av då mycket av mina texter är väldigt personliga. Hoppas ni uppskattar läsningen!
Midnight dreams
Commentary section
With the author - Victoria Ifrig
In the shaping of "Midnight Dreams," I choose narrative in third person to elicit emotional depth and foster a connection with both the characters. Alternating between Sofia and Alex's perspectives, the narrative structure aimed to provide insight into their individual struggles and relationship dynamics, aligning with Norris's (2013) perspective on narrative reflexivity and its role in engaging readers with characters' inner worlds (Norris, 2013) to better understand both individual characters.

Employing sensory details and vivid imagery, such as the alarm clock's frantic movements and the ambiance of the dimly lit bar, served to immerse readers fully into the story's setting, echoing Norris's emphasis on sensory engagement to enhance reader immersion and empathy (Norris, 2013). By weaving these elements throughout the narrative it helps with the realism and empathy for the characters' experiences to make the readers connect.
The story explores themes as loneliness and emotional disconnect, depicted through Sofia and Alex's internal reflections and interactions, aligns with Norris's discussion on the importance of narrative reflexivity in probing deeper into characters' emotional landscapes and relational dynamics (Norris, 2013). Sofia's feelings of isolation and longing versus Alex's struggles with depression and self-doubt, were crafted to resonate with readers to reflect on their real emotions and relationships and the hardships that come with both.
Integrating symbolism, such as the pink peonies symbolizing love and renewal, was informed by Norris's insights into the use of symbolic imagery to enrich narrative meaning and invite nuanced interpretation (Norris, 2013). This choice aimed to imbue the story with layers of significance, reinforcing themes of reconciliation and new beginnings while inviting readers to contemplate the deeper implications of the characters' experiences.
Drawing on literary devices like foreshadowing and dramatic irony, the narrative aimed to build tension and anticipation, as discussed by Norris in the context of narrative construction and reader engagement (Norris, 2013). By strategically incorporating these devices, particularly in moments leading to the story's climax, I sought to heighten reader involvement and investment in the characters' journeys. Overall, "Midnight Dreams" endeavors to explore themes of love, loneliness, and renewal through a tapestry of narrative techniques informed by Norris's insights on critical reflections and narrative construction. By engaging with Norris's theoretical framework, I aimed to craft a story that not only entertains but also prompts readers to reflect on the complexities of human relationships and the pursuit of happiness.
For me, "Midnight Dreams" is more than just a story; it's a personal reflection of my own experiences and emotions. As a writer, I often find solace in crafting narratives that explore themes of loneliness, longing, and the pursuit of connection. This story, in particular, serves as a means for me to confront and process my own feelings of sadness and isolation. Through the characters of Sofia and Alex, I see echoes of my own struggles with loneliness and the longing for meaningful connections. Sofia's journey, in particular, resonates with me as she grapples with the complexities of her relationship and the emptiness she feels despite being surrounded by the bustling city of Paris.
In writing "Midnight Dreams," I aim to create a narrative that speaks to the shared experiences of loneliness and longing that many people, including myself, may encounter in their lives. By weaving together elements of realism, symbolism, and emotional depth, I hope to offer readers a sense of solace and understanding, reassuring them that they are not alone in their struggles.
References:
Norris, M. (2013). Studying creative writing. Chapter 9: The role of critical reflections and how to write them.